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The Universe Listens

Trust Ask And Believe

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read

The Universe Listens

Ask, but not with hands that take,

Not with hunger, not with ache.

Speak in trust, in open air,

Not in greed, but in a prayer.

The stars will shift, the tides will turn,

Gifts will come when hearts discern.

Not for hoarding, not for claim,

But for love, a kindled flame.

The universe, vast, yet wise,

Hears the wish within your eyes.

Not demand, but faith so true—

What you need will come to you.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Ali Sadeek Ahmed12 months ago

    Wisdom

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    What a poem to once again make one think. Good job.

  • Marie381Uk (Author)12 months ago

    Thank you 🏆♦️♦️🏆

  • Ignited Minds12 months ago

    Nice

  • Rasma Raisters12 months ago

    Wonderful verse and I love the rhythm and rhyme here,

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