Autumn leaves trees tall
No leaves left on them at all
In flight, they abound.
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Till next time,
Calvin
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Calvin London
I write fiction, non-fiction and poetry about all things weird and wonderful, past and present. Life is full of different things to spark your imagination. All you have to do is embrace it - join me on my journey.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
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Clever use of leaves as a homonym.
So beautiful and different I hope it’s a winner 🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆
Love how you used the word 'leaves' to cover two different meanings. First haiku that used the word autumn, that I've read. Which I think is very refreshing. Also love how the word, abound, covers the visuals of them falling into a pile. Fantastic work, Calvin. All the best in the challenge 🤗❤️
Excellent take on the challenge and use of the form
I love how you made the first two lines rhyme. Such a beautiful Haiku!