The Time I Almost Drowned
A Sensory Retelling of My NDE…
Chlorine fills my nostrils, burning bleach scorching the innards of my nose
Clawing at cold waters, fingers turning numb now, shriveled like prunes, my arms ache as they flail to no avail
Blue wavy waters, an empty pool… white shiny sides but no one in sight, just deeper blue and bubbles spewed, could this be my final adieu
An empty echo, sound from no direction, water echoing all around reminds me of when I was a baby safe and sound
Cold water fills my throat, burning, scratching, clawing as if I swallowed a cat, I’m choking now, and sure that I’m going to drown
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Not a fan of deep water here because I've had my near drowning experience. You portrayed the sensation as I recall it. Nice entry into the challenge!
Omggg, that's such a terrible experience! I'm so glad you're okay now
You've aptly described a multitude of sensations I definitely never wish to experience. Well done and creative response to the challenge.