Deflower…
A deep thought provoking sensory exploration of intimacy for the sensational 2 challenge

White satin sheets now painted crimson red like a murder scene
Our pungent heavy aromatic scent looms hanging in the air, as if we were committing our dead endlessly; again and again
Sticky warm and wet, gooey apple pie filling or the fleshy inside of a plum, for that feeling upon me I have no regrets
Perhaps not as sweet, but as pure as rain, except for your sweaty salty savory skin, titillating my tongue like a 9 volt battery when I was young
Soft pants, moans, and groans that only grow into a loud fever pitched echo, until they finally crescendo into a celestial cacophony of combustion
Your scratches burn deep, even after our deed, the stinging of my flesh lost under your nails; pain and pleasure exchanged, my flesh and seed yours to keep, if not for the carnal ecstasy we’d both probably weep




Comments (1)
Now that was intense! Fantastic poem!