The Throne of Ash and Bone
Mostly venting; gutting yet inspirational
Today, they say, is the day
when our King receives his crown.
Churchyard bells and criers' yells
are heard throughout the town.
"Come," they say, "get out of bed,
and make yourself some speed!
Forget your bread and come instead
To hear what he's decreed!"
With eager feet I hear them leap
To gather in the square
To laugh and cheer and gather near
And learn his wisdom fair.
"Countrymen," says he, "Nay, brothers,
I offer you the truth!
The hate I bear I now will share
To give sufficient proof!
Fear the masked outsider!
Fear the poet and the queer!
As long as you're 'neath my shadow,
No disaster will draw near!
Our wives have left their kitchens,
Our churches lie in dust
And against our gold ambitions
Our guns begin to rust.
Your rage I turn to spirit
Your hate I turn to pride.
Your doubts now you must sever
to join my rising tide!
So come my many ardent men,
You holy patriots all,
Let my banners fly aloft,
Come heed my golden call!"
So his oaths fell from his lips
Like grains of golden sand.
His merry throng, their voices strong,
Obeyed ev'ry command.
Those who would not follow
Nor believed the words he dealt
Found themselves in fetters
Or hid 'mong those who knelt.
Then one day, or so they say,
The divide cracked and grew.
The castles burned and the people turned
On everyone they knew.
Hatred fueled the fire
And idols struck the blaze.
Flesh did crack and sizzle.
The towers all were razed.
None were caught left standing
Except one lonely solemn stone
It was the one he carved himself
His throne of ash and bone.
Today, they say, is the day
Our king receives his crown
But this morbid fate we can abate
Only if we don't back down.
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Comments (17)
Very good! Congratulations!!!
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Your poem is a stirring and poignant depiction of a dark, cautionary tale.
This is a brilliant, thought-provoking piece! A pleasure to read Ian. It does feel like something people need to hear right now. Though, as a writer, I can't help but point out and praise that little limerick! "Come," they say, "get out of bed, and make yourself some speed! Forget your bread and come instead To hear what he's decreed!" BRILLIANT rhythm!
Damn, this gave me a lot to think about. It’s wild how people can cheer for something that ends up destroying everything. That last line hit hard—feels like a warning we all need to hear. Congratulations on getting top story 🎉
good job!
It is very lovely indeed I love it!
Clever rhymes, my friend. Congrats, Ian!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
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first of all, congratulations on your TS.... THIS IS SO MAGNIFICENT.... and so appropriate for today. Thank you for putting so many emotions into one verse. It's BRILLIANT.
Hell yeah well deserved! I'm glad they listened to me :`)
A haunting and powerful tale of a tyrant’s rise and the devastating cost of blind loyalty.A stark reminder of the consequences of unchecked power—brilliantly told!
Oooo, this was so profound! Loved your poem!
This is great! Love it!
elite post.