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The Third Heaven

(beyond the heaven of the air and the heaven of the stars)

By BKPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read

(This poem was created for submission to the Eclipse Vocal challenge in April 2024. The challenge required contestants to write an acrostic poem based on the word e-c-l-i-p-s-e, and I was inspired by my own experience viewing the total eclipse of the sun that month- from which the above image was taken.)

Empyrean, come closer

Contain that crescent / that corona / that cold comedown

Look, for heaven’s sake, see how

Inanna ascends, integrates, inch by inch

Pulls the moon up (and over)

Sees the sun stare (as ever)

Everything connected, everything magic (ever over and over)

Acrostic

About the Creator

BK

self-indulgent attempts to write personal essays on the subject of being human + whatever else pours out

all photos are my own.

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  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    This is quite lovely.

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