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The Tempting Flame

Pain of the alone

By John R. GodwinPublished 5 days ago Updated 5 days ago 1 min read
The Tempting Flame
Photo by Alizea Sidorov on Unsplash

I touched your wild flame

to warm my frigid heart, now

it's frozen and burned.

Haikuheartbreaklove poemssad poetry

About the Creator

John R. Godwin

Sifting daily through the clutter of my mind trying to create something beautiful.

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  • Rick Henry Christopher 3 days ago

    I like the contrast of “frozen and burned.” Both that wild flame and frigid heart burn with desire and pain. Excellent challenge entry, John.

  • Julie Lacksonen4 days ago

    I like your take on the challenge, especially the last line, "frozen and burned!" 💜

  • Sandy Gillman5 days ago

    So much weight in three lines.

  • This one's beautiful! But check the syllables on the first line please before the submissions close! <3

  • Lana V Lynx5 days ago

    Heartbreaks are hard, but what a great haiku!

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