
It starts with a whisper behind the tongue,
A flicker of thought where hunger’s begun.
Not hunger _ no _ but a glint, a tease,
A curl of sugar carried on breeze.
*
It echoes and echoes.
Pulls you in, then goes away.
Makes you regret yesterday.
*
It calls in shadows, soft and low,
A velvet voice that starts to grow.
“Just one taste,” it hums through bone,
And suddenly… you’re not alone.
*
The mouth remembers, oh it knows,
The syruped highs, the candied throes.
Molten caramel, a frosted dream,
That powdered sugar, and its sticky feast
that makes you go “wheee.”
*
It tightens gently in your chest,
A craving dressed in Sunday best.
It doesn’t shout. It doesn’t scream.
It dances softly in your dream.
Pulling you in.
*
You see it there, that cookie bite.
A choir in your head, saying just one bite,
Of the chocolate square, the creamy white.
Your hands move quicker than your thought.
Your breath is shallow, and suddenly your will is caught.
*
The first taste hits, electric fire,
The moment’s warm, escalating peak in the choir,
Singing hallelujah.
Dopamine’s rushed, a hush, then a dizzy spin,
A fleeting joy beneath the skin.
*
But ah, the fall, the fog, the slip,
The sugar ghost with sugared grip.
It’s not just taste, it’s tethered deep,
Sweet lullaby that steals your sleep.
*
Your mind is murky, your spirit’s slow,
Still chasing that initial glow.
And somewhere, somewhere soft inside,
A quiet voice begins to chide.
*
What is this hunger you obey?
What wound does sugar wash away?
What ache do sprinkles try to mend?
What do you reach for in the end?
*
Is it comfort? Is it ease?
A borrowed joy, for a moment’s peace?
A sweet disguise, a softened scream,
A substitute for the tough feels?
*
So close your eyes, breathe in the truth,
The craving’s veil is light, uncouth.
You are not hollow, not a cave,
You don’t need sugar just to behave.
*
You are rhythm. You are calm.
Your breath is honey. Your heart is balm.
You don’t need sugar to feel good inside.
Let cravings rise. Let cravings pass.
They’re clouds, not chains, and they do not last.
*
You choose what feeds your soul today.
Not every sweet must have its way.
There’s peace beyond the candied spin.
There’s wholeness rising from within.
*
When next it whispers, that sweet pull.
You’ll feel it rise, but you’ll stay cool.
You’ll smile, exhale, and play no fool.
*
Push aside, and walk away,
Let sugar lose its say.
And feel more free with every day.
About the Creator
Marvelous Michael
I’m so glad you are here!
“Heaven and earth will pass away, but My words will by no means pass away.”
Matthew 24:35 NKJV
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Comments (4)
This felt like such an accurate struggle of the mind battling against an addiction. The sugar could represent all sorts of things. But I have my own problem with sweets (mainly chocolate, lol) 😋 Beautifully written and crafted, Marv. I'm so happy to be able to read more of your work. I hope the studies are going well for you.
The craving for sugar is hardwired, unlike salt which can be rewired. I'm not a sweets fan, but I identify with the woman in the picture when I eat sweets 😆like " why did I do that... " great job here!
This poem really nails the pull of sugar cravings. It makes you think about why we reach for sweets. I've been there, mindlessly grabbing a treat. But then you start to wonder what's really driving that urge. Do you think it's mostly about comfort, or is there more to it?
Oh so relatable! The painting says it all too. Great job!!👏