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The Surface Hold Its Breath

A poem

By Denise LarkinPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
The Surface Hold Its Breath
Photo by Ibrahim Rifath on Unsplash

It begins with a hush so wide

you could walk across it—

a pond before the stone,

skin of the world stretched,

waiting.

***

Light drapes itself over the water,

not falling,

but settling—

as if it, too, has paused to listen

to the breath between thoughts,

to the hush of something just about

to become.

***

There is no wind,

only the promise of wind.

No birdsong,

only the memory of flight

etched in the air.

Trees forget their movement.

Leaves hold their stories tightly.

***

You stand there—

not separate from it,

but stitched into its stillness.

Your shadow does not tremble.

Your breath does not rush.

Even your name feels like a ripple,

a whisper, a hush.

***

And then—

a shimmer.

***

Not sound, not sight—

but a shift,

like an old memory awakening,

without reason.

A flick of light

on the lip of water,

or the ghost of a thought

always waiting to return.

***

It says: this is it.

This is the quiet you circled.

The moment just before

the world admits it has a heart.

Before time exhales,

before the first small break

in surface tension

sends everything expanding.

***

You blink.

The light changes.

***

The hush becomes a murmur.

A breeze brushes the pond’s skin

like a whisper of curtains.

Somewhere, a fin cuts the surface,

brief as breath.

***

But the knowing remains—

held in the soft place

between what stirred

and what stayed still.

***

As if you’ve touched

the underside of something vast

and it blinked.

***

And now,

you'll never again,

call this moment ordinary,

because it descends upon you,

like a blip of a scene that curls

in your hair,

in your toes,

as your breath surfaces on the horizon

and you feel light in your heart,

ready to release the tension inside

the stillness.

BalladFree VerseGratitudeheartbreakinspirationalnature poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Denise Larkin

A writer with a BA in Arts & Humanities (specialism Creative Writing), studying for an MA in Creative Writing, writes poetry and fictional short stories. The author of Time to Run, The Island of Love, Darkness, and The Non-Human.

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  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    💙

  • Oh wow, this was so breathtaking! Loved your take on the challenge!

  • angela hepworth6 months ago

    This was so gorgeous and ethereal in its detail. Beautiful work :)

  • Nicolas Breggruen 6 months ago

    Thanks

  • Jack Ray6 months ago

    Such a deep and powerfully worded poem.

  • James6 months ago

    An excellently worded poem.

  • Poker Guy6 months ago

    Beautiful and heartwarming poem.

  • Lilly6 months ago

    Such a well-crafted poem. Your wording makes it so blissful.

  • L.I.E6 months ago

    Wow, Love how you described the feeling. So strongly and so real. Excellent writing 🤍

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