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The Summit

High-ku for the Mountain

By KJ AartilaPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Summit
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a grand dream daring

no limits can stop my climb

at the peak, I’ll fly

nature poetry

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KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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  • Dr. Constance Quigley3 years ago

    I love the imagery, a great poem. Good luck!

  • Call Me Les3 years ago

    I like the uplifting vibe of this <3

  • Morgana3 years ago

    very inspirational <3

  • Max Russell3 years ago

    This is a great and moving story! 🏔

  • Brittany Miller3 years ago

    We're all chasing our dreams, in one way or another. The drive to keep pushing until we fly is what keeps us going, I think. Very nice!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Wow, the ending! So free and inspiring. Great job :)

  • Beautiful... I love it...!!!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Motivational!!!

  • Very inspirational and uplifting!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    very, very nice. Love it.

  • inspiring

  • Dawn Salois3 years ago

    Beautiful haiku!

  • A wonderful take on the challenge, great words

  • Test3 years ago

    Fantastic, Keila 💕🙂

  • AGB3 years ago

    Love it!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Ahhh, that last line. Superb.

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