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The Space Between Thoughts

Exploring the depths of our understanding

By Gabriela Trofin-TatárPublished about a year ago 2 min read
Top Story - October 2024
The Space Between Thoughts
Photo by Birmingham Museums Trust on Unsplash

For some time now,

a roof of wisdom had grown over her head.

It sheltered her from many storms that spread,

sometimes even from the biting cold

and the slow drip of Chinese water torture;

so bold indeed to be her.

She no longer felt the urge

to contradict a different point of view,

even when it felt strange and askew,

it was a new kind of crookedness, too.

Somehow, her perspective had shifted.

curiosity within her had lifted.

She sought to understand the roots more deeply

from which expressions of another’s mind

might creep.

No longer afraid to think with grace,

drawing from the depths of her neural space,

she wanted to be there, all of herself,

to explore and discover those feelings of old,

when she wasn’t just agreeing to what she was told.

A beautiful new world to behold!

She often met those who lived in fear,

who kept their minds closed, unwilling to hear,

clinging to ideas that fluttered like sparrows,

straight from the pages of books — seemingly neutral —

but dangerous like sharp stinging arrows.

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Author’s note: In this poem, I explore my journey of self-growth and the power of curiosity that resides in each of us, humans. I wanted to show some balance between being open-minded and closed-minded, how our views can change when and if we agree to explore new ideas. As we think about understanding different perspectives and the courage it takes to question what we’ve always believed, we might meet people who keep to their old and familiar ideas out of fear.

True wisdom is about daring to explore, too ask questions, and grow. I hope my poem encourages you to reflect on your journey. Try to be more curious in this amazing world full of possibilities.

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* I originally published this poem here.*

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About the Creator

Gabriela Trofin-Tatár

Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/

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  • Ignited Mindsabout a year ago

    A beautiful reflection on personal growth, embracing curiosity, and the courage to question beliefs.

  • Stuart Jamesabout a year ago

    I admire🥰 your profile and I've just followed you ✨ Looking forward to connecting more with you💐

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Wonderful poem

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I consider it a green flag indicating strong character when someone sheds a closely held belief and says, "ok, I was wrong."

  • Aniece Vernonabout a year ago

    Amazing.

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Wonderful self-exploration in verse. Loved it. Great choice of illustration too. Augustus Leopold Egg, The Travelling Companions, 1862, Birmingham (England) Museum and Art. I have no seen it before. Seems to be a study of symmetry, similarity and difference.

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    The sentiment behind this poem and the person who wrote it just made the world a better place. *Whispering* Do it again. 😊

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    I am subscribing to you

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on a well deserved top story. a beautiful story of self discovery.

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Wow! Such an amazing poem! Congratulations on very well deserved top story! ✨👏

  • JBazabout a year ago

    I just love the flow of this piece and the wisdom within each line. Congratulations

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    This is simply beautiful. What a thoughtful journey. There is so much to be learned from reflection. Congratulations on your top story. I have happily subscribed

  • Testabout a year ago

    brilliant and lovely

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    This is a lyrical account of the often painful and puzzling transition from naive obedience to bold, independent inquiry. I think many of my students would benefit from reading it!

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