There once was a party of mice
Who were all quite allergic to spice
So they hired a yak
To taste-test all their snacks
And the arrangement worked out very nice
About the Creator
M. A. Mehan
"It simply isn't an adventure worth telling if there aren't any dragons." ~ J. R. R. Tolkien
storyteller // vampire // arizona desert rat
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So,nice
I love this poem! It's playful and imaginative, and the rhyming scheme is consistent throughout, which adds to the fun and light-hearted tone. The idea of mice hiring a yak to taste-test their snacks because they're allergic to spice is both creative and humorous. I appreciate how the poem is concise yet manages to convey a complete story with a satisfying ending. Overall, this is a well-crafted and enjoyable poem that made me smile. Great job! If you want, you can also check out my take on this challenge: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/embracing-life-s-absurdity%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">