The Silent Pursuit
Reflections on Desire, Loss, and the Hunt That Shapes Us

I step into the shadowed woods
where light flickers like fractured glass
and every rustle could be promise
or phantom.
The hunt begins not with a weapon
but with a longing
an ache for something elusive
something I sense more than see.
The earth trembles with each step
and I trace the shape of absence
the fleeting glint of what might be mine.
Sometimes it shivers at the edge of perception
like a heart half-seen
like a word almost remembered.
I follow it
through thickets that scratch my skin
and thoughts that scratch memory
through the ache of the chase
that is both hunger and devotion.
My breath drums against the stillness of the forest
my desire a signal fire
to the ghost I seek.
And then sometimes I catch it
a glint of fur, a flash of wing
or the glance of another soul
that mirrors mine.
I reach out, and for a heartbeat
the world holds together
tense with longing.
I hold it and it holds me
and I know the hunger has been answered.
But often I return empty-handed.
The silence of the woods fills my soul
the pursuit lingers in my mind.
I taste the bitter sweetness of wanting
the thin ache of absence
and I understand
the hunt itself is revelation.
For in the seeking, I find myself
shaped by the path
by the silent insistence of hope
by the pull of the unseen.
The chase leaves its mark on me
and even in missing, I carry something
a fragment of the thing I hunted
a glimmer that guides the next hunt.
I step again into shadowed woods
and the world waits
always waiting
for the hunt to continue.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (3)
Tim, your poem is so well expressed, Beautiful!!!!!
Well-wrought! You've explored this theme well!
"In the seeking I find myself" the hunt of every modern person. Beautifully written.