The Shortest Eclipse
An In Eclipse Acrostic Challenge Poem
By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Jasmin Egger on Unsplash
Egg
Cracks.
Light
Inverted.
People
Shocked.
End.
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A fun clever one! I like it! Well done, Rachel!
So simple, and so well done..
Rd - Bangers and Mash with that - Jb
At least we can have mayonnaise. Great acrostic.
This poem really boils it all done to an image of a fragile universe. Lowest … word … count … ever. Well done!
Great job 😀
👏👏👏👏
Oiii❤️
HMM. HMM. It's humorous.
My word this made me smile. Love how experimental it is and how it is just...yes, brilliant lol! I am about to put another up - but stuck as usual on titles lol.
Hahahahahahahha no idea why but that made me laugh. Yes, I'm easily amused 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Yes, yes, yes - brilliant!
Nicely done
Great
Oh, deftly done indeed!