Everyone Looks at the Sky
An In Eclipse Acrostic Challenge Poem
By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Elena Rabkina on Unsplash
Everyone looks at the sky;
Clouds gather, cluster up high.
Light that has blinded our eyes
Instantly brought down to size.
Peeping from out of the sides,
Sun and its shyness subsides.
Everyone looks from the sky.
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Comments (9)
Love the rhyming in this one.
Cherish the people around you because they make life worth living. Make the most of every day and live it to the fullest because we never know how much time we have left. I wish you good health, a bright future and a happy life. May you always be surrounded by love and support. 🙏🙏🙏
Oooo, everyone looks from the sky. That kinda seems unsettling to me. Like imagine people actually looking down at us from the sky. Creeeeeeeepy, lol. Loved your Acrostic!
Beautiful thought ❤️ my dear
In agreement with Paul, Loved the slightly varied bookend lines! Great rhythm and rhyme
Very well written yeah you are right every one looks at the sky
Very well written. Congratulations!
Again, I agree with Paul. This poem works and sings. Well done, Rachel!
Boom. Love this. Simple and effective and pretty. I also love the bookends of the E lines. Makes it sound and look nice! Well done, Chum!