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The Self-Critic

A reflective short poem

By Simon AylwardPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
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My work here is done!

only lasts for a mo,

as the mind starts to groan

under weights of its own

How could anyone read

such a nonsense as mine;

Jumbled words that I feed

them, like worms on a line.

Can I please have it back now?

Oh Jesus don’t look,

at my god-awful prose

in this unholy book.

Snatching it back, I brood

This is your fault!

I’m just misunderstood,

fuck it, let it all rot!

* * *

Originally published at https://medium.com/the-lark/the-self-critic-7bf33f7cb05c

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About the Creator

Simon Aylward

Undiscovered Irish Playwright and Poet - Seeker of eternal youth - Wannabe time traveller and believer in spiritual energies - Too many books to read, not enough time!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran8 months ago

    I really hope that you don't actually feel this way. Because your writing is excellent!

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