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The Scent Will Nullify Her Walk

Raising awareness against chemical scents

By Seema PatelPublished 5 days ago 1 min read
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The woman was going for a walk,

her poodle following behind,

through a beautiful neighborhood.

Scenic valley, birdsongs,

tree shade, blooming flowers.

It should have been enough

to bring health,

but she will not reap that benefit.

Do you know why?

She passed us by,

and the scent she was wearing

lingered in the air.

My mouth became foamy,

I felt like spitting.

I am in better health now,

but years ago,

I was sick with allergies.

Inhaling such scents

tightened my trachea,

I struggled breathing.

She is wearing perfume,

If she wears scent on a walk,

her house must be filled with it,

room fresheners, scented candles,

detergents, shampoo, lotion.

Her hormones are confused,

immune system is provoked.

It is only a matter of time

before a diagnosis arrives,

nature walk is not enough,

for those who embrace vice,

be it by choice or ignorance.

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About the Creator

Seema Patel

Hi, I am Seema. I have been writing on the internet for 15 years. I have contributed to PubMed, Blogger, Medium, LinkedIn, Substack, and Amazon KDP.

I write about nature, health, parenting, creativity, gardening, and psychology.

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  • Marie381Uk 5 days ago

    I have a runny nose if I wear perfume lately so I believe this. We don’t know what we are buying♦️♦️♦️

  • Mother Combs5 days ago

    Some scents are worse than others, that's for sure. I've always liked the natural scent of the air.

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