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The Ribbon and the Roots

You slipped away like a bad dream

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
Br George’s Girl 2025

The Ribbon and the Roots

In the heat of the desert where silence is deep,

I buried my joy where the shadows now sleep.

A tree stood in witness, its limbs stretched wide,

Wrapped in red ribbons where truth tried to hide.

Each bow tied tightly was laced with regret,

A memory wrapped I could never forget.

You carved out a promise, then left it to fade,

Like love in the sun, it withered, betrayed.

The sand held your footprints, now gone with the wind,

A cruel kind of magic where lies never end.

I traced them to nothing, to the edge of my pain,

Where echoes of laughter now howl like the rain.

The ribbon you tied slid down to the ground,

A serpent of velvet, no comfort it found.

It coiled ’round my ankles, it whispered your name,

Then choked out the light with its silken shame.

A heart made of ribbon, shaped tight in the dust,

Mocked all my dreams and turned them to rust.

Its center was hollow, its edges were sharp,

It bled without bleeding, it sang in the dark.

The tree didn’t tremble, it knows how to wait,

Its bark bears the secrets of love turned to hate.

I screamed at the sky, but it swallowed my voice,

Cruelty, not kindness, was always your choice.

No ending was written, just a fading refrain,

Of ribbons and ruin and salt in the rain.

I stayed in the desert, with nothing to mend,

Some stories are meant to have no end.

So let the red ribbon decay where it fell,

A tether to heartbreak, a root straight to hell.

Not every tear gets a reason or rhyme,

Some just keep falling, forgotten by time.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin9 months ago

    The way you explore the contrast between the ribbon and the roots is such a powerful metaphor for connection, growth, and grounding. It made me think about how we’re all tied to something — whether it’s family, memories, or our own past. 🌱

  • Calvin London9 months ago

    Another gem, Marie!

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Fantastic dear

  • Susan Payton9 months ago

    I screamed at the sky but it swallowed my voice. You have wrote happier poems Marie, I hope you don't mind me saying - but this one upset me a bit. Nicely done as always.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Fantastic poem and well written, you always bring us surprise poems, as I said before, you're the only one I've seen in the Vocal ''Poet Queen''

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