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Like The Desert Sands

I let you slip away

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Like The Desert Sands

You slipped through my hands,

Like desert sands,

Soft and fine,

Gone in no time.

I tried to hold tight,

till morning turned to night,

yet all that remained

Was silence and sand.

No footprints to chase,

No trace of your face,

The wind took it all,

My heart watched it fall.

The sun burned above,

I searched for your love,

But heat only gave

An empty wave.

Each grain told a tale

Of love grown pale,

Of moments we lost,

And what they cost.

I knelt in the dust,

no love, not a crust,

Just shadows and sky,

And me asking why.

You slipped through my hands,

Like desert sands,

And all I can do,

is to remember us two.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin9 months ago

    The comparison to the desert felt both haunting and hopeful — as if even in the emptiness, there’s room for transformation. 🌞 I really loved how you conveyed that sense of time passing, yet remaining steady in the midst of everything. Beautifully written. 💖

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Fascinating poem and well written, good luck

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