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The Rearview

Between the Breeze and the Blush

By Ellie HoovsPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Somewhere Between Here and There Challenge
The Rearview
Photo by Michael Hamments on Unsplash

Halfway through the drive

I wondered if the world here

felt as in-between as I did,

the summer breeze

already flirting with autumn,

leaves not yet blushing,

only swaying in anticipation.

***

The fields, crisped by the blazing sun,

perfume the air with cinnamon.

Pine clings sticky,

saccharine against the damp petrichor;

metallic rock,

the quiet conquest of mycelium

over fallen bark, dropped needles,

and the husks of cicadas.

***

These roads carry the ghosts

of those who drove them before me,

their harvests,

their winters,

their worn maps folded in glove boxes.

What of me will remain

when the fields have turned again?

***

The crows caw over the grain,

reminding me that there is still time

to make something that lasts

but I know I have miles left to go,

winters yet to endure,

harvests yet to reap

what I have only just sown.

***

Under an archway of trees,

Queen Anne's lace lining the curves,

bowing in the wind as I pass,

yet the rearview keeps filling

with memories of me I didn't mean to lose.

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 months ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • K.B. Silver 5 months ago

    Gorgeous, that second stanza especially, is like stepping into the scene you are painting us with your words.

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    This was incredibly deep and thought-provoking. It was also a delight for the senses. Your imagery was truly top notch. What an incredible piece, Ellie :)

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