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The Raven's Bridge

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by Christine Sponchia from Pixabay

Dark and mysterious

Standing as if in a portal

To another dimension

Guarding their domain

From interlopers

Ruffling their pretty

Black feathers

Shiny and sleek

Smartly staring

Waiting for their time

Wondering if you are the one

That was chosen

To cross their path

On this bleak and dreary day

And if you are not the one

They are prepared to

Drop bomb you

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    That would be an ewww kinda bomb. Lol. Loved your poem!

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I love ravens, maybe because of Poe. But their black ominous presence is kinda witchy and mysterious. Nive one.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    I liked this idea of the portal a lot .. they creep me out! Hahah. Very mysterious writing - great job Mother Combs.

  • Alisa İnnokate2 years ago

    ✨️✨️✨️

  • Addison M2 years ago

    The last line really brought a touch of humor to it. Great!

  • Test2 years ago

    Moody and a bit humorous at the end. Nice poem. I enjoyed this 🙏Pernoste

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Nice one. Drop bomb sounds rather ominous. 😬

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