Money is your only motivator,
the sunken depths of 'you'll die alone' probably
rattling
through your middle-aged ears.
Sit up and stare into the midnight
distance hoping
that someone cares about you.
But they don't.
You are the shrew that eats the cheese
and asks
why the others work together
to gather
quietly
amongst the brambles and bushes
for hours on end
though there's little reward.
You think anyone will remember you -
many have forgotten you already and
you're still alive,
does that embarrass you?
There are more people than you know
that think of you
only
as the walking embodiment
of a migraine.
You are a disease for the ages -
one that festers lonely and hoping
that someone cares.
For there is nobody who deserves to be alone
quite
like
you.
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Comments (5)
Oh wow, I wish I can send this to my ex. It'll be a slap to his face, lol. Loved your poemA
The poem’s stark honesty and biting tone create a powerful, unsettling portrait of isolation and self-awareness. Its rawness challenges the reader to confront uncomfortable truths about loneliness and human connection.
I feel personally attacked. Well, it is accurate.
With no offence to animal rats, I imagine. 🐀 So yeah, quite descriptive of some creatures.
Vaguely reminds me of a poem by John Cooper Clarke that rhymes with the title of this. Encellent poetical analysis of the situation with this sort of person