The Rare Visitor
I hope to see you in my lifetime
She was a rare visitor,
a mystery to everyone,
never around long enough, and in a blink, she's gone
She wasn't just popular,
she was well admired
people tend to stop and stare whenever she transpired
Though, not everyone is able
to witness this event,
you'd be lucky if you saw her just once in your present.
During her fortuity,
she always looks the same,
they whisper she's an ageless beauty, and nothing dims her flame
There is a large portion,
of those who dare to dream,
saying she'll bring you hope and good fortune if she's ever seen
who is this person, you ask
that's glorified in fame?
she's the brightest shooting star, and Halley's Comet is her name.
About the Creator
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I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Compelling and original writing
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Excellent storytelling
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Comments (2)
Oh, I loved the way you held off the identity until the end. Clever and lovely wrapped up on in one, great work :)
Loved the reveal of what the poem is about at the end :)