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The Pressed Rose

Love Long Lost

By Mother CombsPublished 3 years ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Between the covers of an old novel,

sits a trio of pressed pink roses,

the flowery scent long faded away.

a long-forgotten suitor long ago proposes.

Lovingly pressed between the pages

of the last book they read together

found decades later by the grandchildren

lead to imaginings by them, altogether.

between the pages of a book is the proof

that Grandmother once had a suitor,

who she loved more than their Grandfather,

This lover, who was supposed to be her tutor

She learned many things from him

many things that she never told a soul

He was her everything, her world

and she was something he wanted to control.

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Oooh, this feels so delightful until it takes a painful, dark turn towards the end. Beautiful writing, Sharon. I think, if you have no objections, this is the one I will use for the book. Thank you!

  • L.K. Rolan11 months ago

    Oooo this one is painful, the what iffs the secrets! Thank you for sharing this one with me 🖤

  • Oh this was so sad! It made me very emotional!

  • I like the thought of this 💖✨😊❗

  • Lovely; Mischievous!

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