
Just as the world tilts forward
Here where granite meets the void
where certainty becomes a stranger
and the familiar grows foreign
beneath my boots
The slope steepens into revelation
each step a small betrayal
of whom I was this morning
Below the valley spreads
like spilled ink across parchment
dark waters weaving silver
through the hollers Above
clouds gather in conspiracy
heavy with unspoken truths
that press against my skull
I feel the pull Gravity
or destiny I cannot say
the way stone calls to stone
the way the hungry earth
opens its mouth wide
My heels lift
The world shifts its axis slightly
and I understand there will be
no return to level ground
The wind carries secrets
from the depths ancient prayers
that taste of copper and salt
My fingers uncurl
My breath catches on something sharp
Fear or freedom they feel
the same at this altitude
One moment more of balance
of standing between before
and after between solid
and falling between the self
I carried up this mountain
and the one waiting
at the bottom
The world tilts forward
and I follow
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.




Comments (2)
Great piece, very tense. I loved these lines "clouds gather in conspiracy heavy with unspoken truths that press against my skull"👏
I feel like you're on the precipice physically as well as emotionally in this piece and it's beautifully conveyed. Well written.