The Pen
Doesn't every writer have a favorite pen?
The satisfying click, the smooth roll of the pen
its ink a deeply rich black glides across the page
Just one word written
yet feels like magic, a writer's bliss
ordinary handwriting is transformed into beautiful penmanship
each twirl and curve of l's and s's
each elaborate dot of i's and j's
the satisfying grip of the pen against my fingers
as my creative mind searches for the next words
And then to my frustration,
I lost my favorite pen
there's no other one like it, I'm sure
I tried other pens but they don't compare
words don't come out like before
In reluctance I pick up a blue ink pen
its ink glides across the paper
but its not the same, doesn't feel the same
My mind feels barren, no pen
thus no imagination
but was it really ever the pen?
About the Creator
Jasmine Aguilar
Fascinated by pop culture and its effect on society... movies, music, books.. and pretty much anything.
I love writing and write a little bit of everything including a science fiction WIP!
https://www.buymeacoffee.com/J.A.Rose
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Comments (6)
Well-written! I'm a stickler for a good pen especially when I am journaling!
I love this, I have a favourite pen too, Thankyou for sharing xx
This hits home for me...and I spend more time on my laptop (where did all these pens come from?)
A good pen really makes all the difference.
Oh, I'm so sorry for your lost pen. But, I think you're the one who thinks that all the magic was in your pen. However, you've shown that you can do your best even without that pen. This poem is the proof. I mean, there are things in life that are too hard to give up on. But, your heart is your pen... You can turn anything out of it. Beautifully written 💖✨
Ohh! This is something unique poem, Writing with your favorite pen feels peaceful and comforting.✨👏