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The Painting

S.E.Linn

By S. E. LinnPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Like the fading smudges beneath my eyes,

Remnants of the last pale light of love, I thought.

Bruised and grey, the clouds marked the sky's rosy cheek tonight.

But the shadows of fingerprints on

the soft flesh of my forearm

did not float away as clouds do.

The canvas he had been working on

hid no secrets.

And it was not paint that trickled down her

in a straight and steady line of metallic red.

Like a sunset bleeds without drying,

She looked up and wondered,

In time, will I bleed dry and fade to black like this evening sky?

Could his broad slashes of hurt and anger upon this canvas

change to birds and simply take flight with a few soft brush strokes?

Or would the scars of careless words flung like droplets

permanently stain?

Lids closed, she wondered

what he was trying to create.

But she knew the picture he had painted,

Was fine art born of hate.

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About the Creator

S. E. Linn

S. E. Linn is an award-winning, Canadian author whose works span creative fiction, non fiction, travel guides, children's literature, adult colouring books, and cookbooks — each infused with humor, heart, and real-world wisdom.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    love your poems

  • That was so intense and poignant. Loved your poem!

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