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The orphans of this creative place

A parody of how I feel being on Vocal. (Things you can't say out loud). Well, you asked. I answered.

By Antoni De'LeonPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
From the miniature world contest on NightCafe

We stand outside the brightly lit, beautiful home of people whom we know not.

Happy laughter rings forth from the slightly open windows

The wind gently ruffles the curtains, as if saying hello

But what it woefully does, is bring the mocking wonderous aroma

To the noses of those watching with longing and a hope for sweet sustenance

The table is laden with richly cooked delectable meats

Cakes, treats and wonderful accompaniments fit for a king

The queen mother panders to the needs of the princes and princesses

The king sits at the head of the table, drinking heady wine

Around the table sit the chosen

Outside, looking in...are the orphans, the homeless

The forgotten.

Their bellies grumbling, for they cannot remember

When they last had a decent meal

The orphans turn away, shuffling back to the abandoned building

which they now call home

They had run away from the foster home,

Where they had gone just as hungry

Made to toil and work all day, then fed from the scraps left over

After the favorite and pampered had had their fill

But out here on their own, they find scraps to eat, without the toil and drudge of uncaring stoical masters

Sometimes if they ae lucky

Some kind soul will offer them a morsel along the way

But most days, crestfallen, hungry, sad and with hearts and heads downcast, they sleep and dream

Of the day when fortune favors the forgotten

The light of achievement shines from heavenly places

And the forgotten become shining stars

Bellies filled to capacity

Success and joy, at long last, cometh in the morning.

Free Verseperformance poetryStream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Antoni De'Leon

Everything has its wonders, even darkness and silence, and I learn, whatever state I may be in, therein to be content. (Helen Keller).

Tiffany, Dhar, JBaz, Rommie, Grz, Paul, Mike, Sid, NA, Michelle L, Caitlin, Sarah P. List unfinished.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    It sure does feel that way sometimes. But I hope that feeling doesn't last and that writing this made you feel better. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Novel Allen7 months ago

    Oh oh! Now you are in the doghouse, they probably won't see it anyway, not to worry. But, yes you can get that feeling. I believe there is a protocol to follow when you join, maybe you didn't get the memo, or maybe you ignored it. But hope lives eternal.

  • C. Rommial Butler7 months ago

    Well-wrought! We must write for its own sake rather than the attention. The judgments of the crowd have always been fickle, and should not sway us from telling the truth.

  • Shirley Belk7 months ago

    Sometimes it can feel that way...lol Especially at first. The way I remedied that was by subscribing to those creators I truly loved reading and learned from each one. I wanted to get better and better with my craft. But I also accepted my own style and learned to embrace that.

  • JBaz7 months ago

    The struggles and frustrations of always feeling left out or ignored especially as an artist hope I am reading this correctly,

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