The Ones Who Hunt the Quiet
For those who discover the silence was never hiding—only waiting to be found.
I have hunted silence through storms—
followed its silver breath
through fields of broken clocks and echoing rooms,
believing that stillness was something I could catch
if I moved fast enough.
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But silence doesn’t run.
It waits.
It lets you chase until you’re breathless,
until your feet forget the earth,
until the world goes thin as glass—
and then it shows you your reflection,
shaking, wild-eyed, reaching for nothing.
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I have hunted love the same way:
with teeth of longing,
with the bowstring of hope drawn too tight.
Each arrow found its shadow.
Each wound I carried home like proof
that I was still searching.
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To hunt is to believe there is something missing.
To capture is to learn that nothing ever was.
The deer was never the point.
The mountain was never the prize.
It was the hunger itself
that made me human—
the endless ache between wanting
and release.
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So I no longer chase the quiet.
I walk beside it.
Sometimes it turns its face to me,
sometimes it doesn’t—
but now,
when the wind shifts,
I know enough
to listen.
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Written for the “Poetry of the Hunt” Challenge — a reflection on what it means to chase the quiet, and what happens when it finally turns to face you.
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Aarsh Malik
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Here is the translation of your reflection into English: I really liked the whole poem, but especially the second stanza. The eternal struggle for love and to have a clear conscience. Everything we do, we do for it; sometimes right, sometimes wrong. Slowly, however, we learn to listen to the wind and its signs.:)
This is amazing.
nice work