🌙 The One That Stayed 🌙
“Even the quiet night remembers you.”
Some nights the world is made of quiet,
a soft unspooling of the hours—
light slipping off the edges of the sky
like a secret finally allowed to rest.
You breathe, and the dark remembers you.
It folds around your shape
the way oceans hold the moon,
pulling and returning,
never letting go.
In that hush,
every forgotten hope stirs again—
a small bird shaking rain from its wings,
ready to rise.
And you remember
that even in silence
there is a heartbeat,
and even in shadow
there is a path,
and even in the smallest moment
there is something
that loves you enough
to stay.
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Well done!
Really lovely reminder that even when we feel lonely we are loved
This is beautiful—soft, comforting, and full of quiet strength. It captures that feeling of being held by the night and reminded that hope always finds its way back.
Your poem is a heartbeat of warmth. I love how you unfold emotions and describe them with such beautiful words. Well done. :)
Naice I really like your poems bro
Yes I like your poems😘
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