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The Observer

And Its Source Of Illumination

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The Observer
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Evacuating the clutter that obscures the wholeness of my beauty

Consuming this ravenous inclination leading me into abandon

Longing for the moment when you lovingly see through me

Imagining that I could escape my inevitable assassin

Passion, like a weapon, I surrender to the notion

Simply underestimated the power of its grasp

Eventually I pause and observe the power of eclipsing. Shielded by another, in the shadows of my mask

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    So magnificently beautiful! Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is so good, I especially love the last line. Well done.

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Your poem beautifully captures the struggle and beauty of self-discovery, vulnerability, and acceptance! Well done!!!!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Also remembering love is not perfect all the time.

  • Remember, red carpet, pearls and sapphire; our yacht is yours to keep. I get sea sick anyway. To the top! This is perfectly perfect.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    There have been times when I had wished for someone to see me as I am and yet, there are other times, when I only want to put on that mask and allow other to see only what I want them to see. Very profound poem. I love it.

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