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The Noise Inside Me

My uneasy mind tries to cope. Some days I can I think?

By Marie381Uk Published about a month ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Noise Inside Me

I wake some days,

feeling built

from torn thoughts,

stitched together wrong.

My mind stays loud,

pages screaming,

notes falling hard

against my skull.

I try to breathe,

but the noise climbs,

twisting words

into sharp shapes.

I feel myself crack,

like broken paper,

fragile pieces

barely holding on.

Some nights I stare,

at nothing at all,

yet everything moves

like a storm inside me.

I fight to stay,

to hold the calm,

to keep my face

from falling apart.

They never see it,

the quiet damage,

the weight of thoughts

that will not rest.

So I keep walking,

even when shaking,

holding the pieces

as tight as I can.

And maybe one day,

my own mind

will loosen its grip,

and let me breathe.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    Listen to the noise for it may be telling you something that you or whomever may need to know and share if the noise kind of makes sense.

  • Calvin Londonabout a month ago

    Nicely done. The mind is such a powerful organ. When it works well, it is amazing; when it gets confused, it's the worst curse you could have.

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    Wow, this is impactful. I hope you get some healing from writing this.

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