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the night

a poem

By Moon DesertPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2023
Photo by Geranimo on Unsplash

the moon shines too bright tonight

I know where you might be

where they draw the blinds and midnight oil

burns incessantly until the last dawn

where the sun never rises and the voices are loud

as well as vices outweighing the virtues of the crowd

where there is no mercy for a good man

where savages rule the world with their depraved mouths and hands

demanding things here and now, without delay

screaming and cursing, mean, merely men

just beasts on the loose, hungry for blood

even if the result is fair, they will take revenge

on you or things that have no defect

this is how this world is made

of vestiges of dignity that drown in the sea

thrown straight into the trash

while the fox longs for a new game

it squeaks like an old sheet

demanding what’s real

to be the bait

but as long as he goes his own way

not catalogued and registered

everything else

it certainly won’t share the same fate

and this is the sad story of what human race

has become

inhuman, first in its league

let’s raise a toast to them

vultures at a feast, agape, lost on the way

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Moon Desert

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BA in Cultural Studies

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  • Toby Heward2 years ago

    It's good to see people creating such colorful vibrancy with their words. Keep it up.

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    Each one of these lines was better than the last. Remarkable poem! Congrats on the Top Story, well deserved!

  • Victor Mendez2 years ago

    BTW-I am a big fan of Bukowski...

  • Victor Mendez2 years ago

    I so love free form and this tells such a good story. No interpretation needed, just the facts! Beautiful

  • I see you're now getting spammed, too, lol. Good old Jay. Powerful poem, & certainly true enough. Though grace can easily be found, even it is almost always tinged with precisely what you describe. Those who say, "I would never do that or be that way," I'm pretty sure have not found themselves in any comparable situation.

  • simran sadangi2 years ago

    wow, that was great! this was my favourite line, "inhuman, first in its league". also congrats on top story!

  • JAY PATEL2 years ago

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  • This was so intense, poignant and held so much of truth! Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • K. Kocheryan2 years ago

    Wow. This was lovely. "where savages rule the world with their depraved mouths and hands demanding things here and now, without delay" Favorite line of the piece.

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