The Moon And Me
Dreamland
I dreamt I woke up on the moon
And sat upon its edge
Just To dangle my feet over
Off its shadowed dimpled ledge
No fishing pole or fallacies
Just me, and naked toes
To witness the whole galaxy
And just enjoy the show
The view from up above
Put all the other views to shame
I started counting all the stars
And gave each one of them a name
Dazzling Dora by the dipper
Caught my eye, right off the bat
And Jack, the rowdy ripper
From a nightmare that I had
Then there was Matt, the mighty meteor
That set my heart ablaze
It was like a brand new metaphor
That astonished and amazed
But the one that moved my soul
Were the stars there - in my eyes
As the sun awakened and aroused
My renewed love for sunny skies
Although the moon was so romantic
Nothing beats the summer bliss
And I knew that I was smitten
When the sun gave me a kiss
I awakened to the sunlight
Resting there, upon my face
I had never felt more alive
Than when I dreamt of outer space
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Excellent storytelling
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Comments (13)
Your words paint a serene image of the moonlit night and its calming effect on the soul. Beautifully written and evocative.😍❤️🥰
“Somewhere out there, beneath the pale moon sky” I was a few states away doing the same thing. Love this. You left off slinging the pillow across the room. lol. Beautiful poem Kelli. ❤️
Lovely!
🥰✨Gorgeous, I Love Moon Poetry❗
Gorgeous and so creative! Wonderful flow!
Wow touchy
Lovely!
This is gorgeous. It flows beautifully and the imagery is splendid. Well done.
I saw ya my friend, I was on the dark side, purty nice up there isn’t it, 😂😂, very nice poem kelli, love it ❤️
Love this so much, it has a musicality to it that makes me want to hear it that way too!
Love this! So comforting except the Jack the Ripper part - lol. But just lovely 🌜🌞🌠
This is so beautiful 🥰🎉
I woke at four this morning because a poem came to me, wrote and published it and went back to bed. Love this