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Macgyver

Just What The Dr. Ordered

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Macgyver
Photo by Kenny Eliason on Unsplash

cobweb message on the ceiling,

dew dripped notes scrawled on the pane.

the promised, promise of forever,

echos, whispering my name.

they say you can' buy happiness,

but who are they to say.

some know to beat the loneliness,

there is a price you have to pay.

i paid what you were asking,

was some kind of switch and bait.

the broken parts were masked,

a painted smile there on your face.

i bought something illusive,

that item never did exist.

you said i was intrusive,

and both of us ended up pissed.

you, because i wouldn't settle,

me, for your dirty little tryst.

i tried so hard not to mettle,

but then - surrendered, when we kissed.

i've since moved on alone, much wiser,

a hard lesson learned, that's true.

a little like, clever MacGyver,

fixed my heart with super glue.

By Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

sad poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Mo Darasi3 years ago

    Great poem. Very powerful and the story was told nicely with overflowing emotion especially at the end.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Sad and beautiful. Well done, as always.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    An emotional ride, and I really love the ending 🥹❤️ Creative and also inspirational in a way. Well done!

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