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The Monster Lies Within

a senryu

By Matthew J. FrommPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
The Monster Lies Within
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Undead hordes arise

I cradle my son tightly

Tempting my hunger

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A different take on this theme:

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Matthew J. Fromm

Full-time nerd, history enthusiast, and proprietor of arcane knowledge.

Here there be dragons, knights, castles, and quests (plus the occasional dose of absurdity).

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    Definitely a horror poem, very creative .

  • Sandor Szabo2 months ago

    You really are great at distilling a concept to the minimum. Very little in the way of description but in my head I’m picturing waves of undead creeping while I/the protagonist, hold my child, feeling the turn coming hahaha Solid work

  • Catsidhe2 months ago

    This reads like a two-sentence horror story in poem form. Well done!

  • Jamye Sharp3 months ago

    Creepy!

  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    Tis the season for eating children.

  • Marilyn Glover3 months ago

    Definitely mighty haunting, Matthew. Congratulations on making this week's leadership board!😊

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊 Also, I hope his son was delicious! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Joe Murphy3 months ago

    Too short

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Congrats on making leaderboard! Can’t imagine having to deal with such a dark reality. Nicely done, friend!

  • C. Rommial Butler3 months ago

    Well-wrought!

  • Are we the people Some kind of monster?

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    Haha at writerwoman’s latter comment! Also haha at your unexpected Senryu. 😄 ..also…hmm.. if the monster lies inside and he eats the youngin’ then maybe an evil child after all!

  • Stephanie Hoogstad3 months ago

    What an excellent piece for the Haunted Echoes Challenges! Sent chills down my spine. Well done!

  • ThatWriterWoman3 months ago

    A twist in such a short piece? What skill! Well done Matthew! Also don't eat children

  • Komal3 months ago

    Oof—this one gave me chills in just three lines. That twist at the end… smooth but dark! ✨

  • JBaz3 months ago

    ‘Tempting my hunger’. This line spells out horror in such a visual way

  • Brutal Ambiguity. What will happen? Excellent work

  • D. J. Reddall3 months ago

    Diabolically clever!

  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    excellent. This made me think of the extreme nature of postpartum depression, and made me wonder, do fathers experience some form of that too? It's a great poem that makes you think deeply.

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    Damn, sir. Dark. Dark. Dark. But bloody marvellous.

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