The Moment Before
Falling Leaves
Photo by Natalia Soto on Unsplash
a flash of amber
sunlight clings a moment more
winter claims the rest
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Steve Lance
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Comments (8)
Such a lovely haiku, Steve, congratulations on your win!🍂
Beautiful, deserved to win imo 😁
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
The somber tone of this haiku is compelling, with evocative phrases such as "flash of amber" and "sunlight clings." The last line's turn of phrase works so well to portray the seasons changing. Congrats!
Hi Steve, you are being featured on Vocal Social Society as part of our Dynamic Duo! Happy to discover you and what a beautiful haiku!
I love your imagery here 🧡
Love the story you tell here Steve, so beautifully expressed 🥰
yet there's no soul to blow the winds