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The Mind Unleashed

Do you ever wonder why?

By Lolly VieiraPublished 8 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2025
The Mind Unleashed
Photo by Bret Kavanaugh on Unsplash

My mind wears a collar,

but the leash drags behind.

They tried to train my spine—

teach it obedience

like a second language.

I sat down.

I shut up.

I blended like beige

trying to disappear into more beige.

But inside?

Meteor storms of why

lit fires under facts

until they sweated the truth.

Why.

Why.

Why.

Say it long enough

and it turns strange,

like a tongue chewing itself.

If I can catch the why—

not kill it,

just gently pin it—

maybe the when will confess,

the who might get nervous,

the where could finally

pull up a chair and apologize.

And peace—

peace might tiptoe in

like it wasn’t invited,

but hoped someone would ask.

They looked at me

like I was a statue

someone lost interest in carving.

Compliant.

Contained.

Quiet—

like an unplugged toaster.

A good little carbon unit.

But beneath the stillness,

my mind swam

with jellyfish philosophies,

a rebellion of soft thoughts

and sharp questions,

marching across a chessboard

no one else could see.

The body may obey.

But the mind?

The mind slipped the leash

a long time ago—

barefoot,

hand in hand with why,

laughing

as they skip

through locked doors.

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Lolly Vieira

Welcome to my writing page where I make sense of all the facets of myself.

I'm an artist of many mediums and strive to know and do better every day.

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  • F. M. Rayaan7 months ago

    The leash may drag, but the mind runs free. 'Hand in hand with why'—brilliant.

  • Kendall Defoe 8 months ago

    And I thought it was just me...

  • Dua Nouman8 months ago

    I really enjoyed reading this alot!! And the line: "The body may obey. But the mind?"

  • Jasmine Aguilar8 months ago

    The mind can be quite chaotic sometimes! A mix of brilliant ideas and anything in between.

  • Sun-Jinwo8 months ago

    Super 💯

  • Leesh lala8 months ago

    Unleashed wonder dances with defiant why.

  • Sean A.8 months ago

    That “peace tiptoed in… like someone would ask” is so great. It feels like such a timeless line.

  • Aspen Marie 8 months ago

    Lolly!! I swear we are on the same wavelength today. This is masterful and full of raw energy, I can feel it in my chest

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