The Man Tree
In the garden, a strange tree grows,
With silly men hanging like clothes.
Their faces grumpy, their clothes a mess,
From their branches, there's quite a stench!
When spring comes, they wave their arms,
But their smell can clear a room, no charms!
With each groan, they make us laugh,
A funny sight, a silly gaffe.
Here’s to the tree, so wild and free,
With grumpy men, what a sight to see!
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️
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I feel you are more interested in the paradise of nature and a well-written poem.
Superb work