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The Man In The Moon, Wears A Velvety Smile

And, He Likes The Way I Sing

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
The Man In The Moon, Wears A Velvety Smile
Photo by Arun Regi Alex on Unsplash

In the still of the morning, just before the alarm,

I steal away to look at the moon.

To see if by chance, he granted the wishes,

I sang to the stars, out of tune.

*

Sitting there, in my chair, wrapped in my favorite robe,

I look out, there he is, looking back.

That old man in the moon, with a wink in his eye

giving cheer to his favorite sad-sack.

*

He shines down on me, with that velvety smile,

each beam grander than the one before.

Like the sea, he pulls me, bringing me peace,

giving calm, to my dwindling shores

*

Reassuring me, that it's me that he sees

and he's come, with his touch, to restore.

I can see new ways, in the path that he shows

there's no need to wander alone, anymore.

*

Taking away all the lonely I feel,

in the dusk, just before the sun rises

Filling me up with an unspeakable joy

till we meet here together, tonight

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Jess3 years ago

    Lovely poem! On nights when sleep escapes me, I too find the moon to be a quiet companion.

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    So beautifully written; I love how you wrote about the man in the moon. :) Wonderful!

  • KJ Aartila3 years ago

    This one makes me smile. 😃 Nice!

  • Colt Henderson3 years ago

    Had to heart this. The imagery was wonderful!

  • Hassan3 years ago

    Oh this really was sweet!

  • This was so sweet and wonderful! Beautifully written!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Wow. This is beautiful.

  • Joe Patterson3 years ago

    Enjoyably romantic and heartfelt. ❤️

  • Gerald Holmes3 years ago

    I really love your poetry. Well done.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Super spectacular!!!💖😊💕

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