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The Locksmith Rises from the Dead

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By Marie381Uk Published about 2 hours ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2025
By George’s Girl 2026

The Locksmith Rises from the Dead

No stone to mark, no bell to chime,

he woke beneath the weight of grime,

keys still hooked across his chest,

as if no grave could grant him rest.

He stood, not with a hero’s grace,

but slow, like rust reclaiming space.

Each joint a hinge, each breath a spark,

the world above still cold and dark.

His hands remembered every door:

the bolted ones, the ones that swore

they’d never swing for man or ghost.

He’d cracked them all, or damned near most.

No message came, no call from light.

He rose for lock, not wrong or right.

He rose because the work’s not done,

and some doors fear what he’s become.

The locksmith walks, not seeking fame.

He doesn’t weep, he doesn’t name

the lives he let in or shut out.

He turns the key. He doesn’t doubt.

And somewhere down a hallway bare,

a knob will twitch, then gasp for air.

A handle turns without a touch,

he’s passed through, quiet, never much.

No peace awaits him, just the sound

of latches snapping underground.

His reason To come back?

To collect old debts once more,

and show the beasts he carries on,

much worse than he was before.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Madison "Maddy" Newtonabout 2 hours ago

    An awesome Top Story, well done!

  • Tim Carmichael8 months ago

    Like grief with gears. The Locksmith isn’t just undead, he’s inevitable. Congrats on your top story!

  • Dr Gabriel 8 months ago

    Nice

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    There you go, Marie, just when you were losing faith a op story award for a truly great poem. I loved the way you got it to rhyme. It moves along very nicely. 😉😉

  • Jamye Sharp8 months ago

    Interesting idea.

  • Ademola8 months ago

    Well composed . Kudos to the poet

  • Zakir Ullah8 months ago

    nice

  • K.B. Silver 8 months ago

    Great rhythm and rhyme. Congrats on the top story.

  • Amy8 months ago

    This is great!!

  • Aspen Marie 8 months ago

    Wonderful! Your cadence and your content are in sync so effortlessly.

  • Muhammad 8 months ago

    Soooooper

  • Jay Kantor8 months ago

    Dear Marie - Yes, it's a drag that 'Perps' just have the ability to lift our 'Schtick. As an old-fashioned legal professional, I just don't get their end-game at all..! - My Respect - j.in.l.a.

  • Tom Baker8 months ago

    Like it!

  • Nikita Angel8 months ago

    A haunting poem about a relentless locksmith rising from the grave to settle old debts

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