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The Last Gift
A sad poem about a beautiful thing
By Alexander McEvoyPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Matthew Henry on Unsplash
Thump thump
Thump thump
Steady as the beating drum
Thump thump
Thump thump
Generous as the rising sun
Thump thump
Thump thump
A final gift unknowingly given
Thump thump
Thump thump
Heard again in a different chest
Thump thump
Thump thump
Your heart beats on now you’re at rest
Thump thump
Thump thump
About the Creator
Alexander McEvoy
Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)
"The man of many series" - Donna Fox
I hope you enjoy my madness
AI is not real art!
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Comments (4)
This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!
This was heartbreakingly beautiful Alex!! Love this!!
It's remarkable that in such a simple poem you can elicit such strong emotions in me. Phenomenal!
A great gift and a great poem! Well done, Alexander!