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The Last Gift

A sad poem about a beautiful thing

By Alexander McEvoyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Last Gift
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Thump thump

Thump thump

Steady as the beating drum

Thump thump

Thump thump

Generous as the rising sun

Thump thump

Thump thump

A final gift unknowingly given

Thump thump

Thump thump

Heard again in a different chest

Thump thump

Thump thump

Your heart beats on now you’re at rest

Thump thump

Thump thump

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Alexander McEvoy

Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)

"The man of many series" - Donna Fox

I hope you enjoy my madness

AI is not real art!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your poem!

  • Silver Dauxabout a year ago

    It's remarkable that in such a simple poem you can elicit such strong emotions in me. Phenomenal!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    A great gift and a great poem! Well done, Alexander!

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