
When content becomes malignant
And the footing has been lost
Fingerprints are mostly water
Water corrodes and metals rust
There are no damage control strategies
No lasting friendships to be made
Though you offer up apologies
The room still smells of hate
Accused of being faithless
Still agnostic to the facts
We struggle to stay blameless
As truth filters through the cracks
Needing to find some self assurance
With nothing to show for, in the bag
We find our strength in perseverance
To cover up the things we lack
Mistakes come from underestimating
When you’re accustomed to the latter
Can’t prove your story, guesstimating
Missing the next rung up the ladder
So, keep in touch, the deeds not over
Because believe me, it never will
Keep your misdeeds under cover
And your shortcomings to yourself
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (9)
Absolutely and ridiculously brilliant: your message is clear and razor sharp.
But my shortcomings are far too readily apparent for me to keep them to myself. It's too much work, Kelli. But once again, I love the poem.
Nive Kelli, especially: "We struggle to stay blameless As truth filters through the cracks"
Hi Ki - As a lifetime severe coulrophobic, once past your heading, I just want to say: Being in the hurry-up-and-wait for 'Jury' deliberations profession - I've had a lifetime of 'Schpielkies' (Ants-in-the Pants)...! Friend, J-Bud
Wow, that was emotional. And therapeutic too, Kelly.
Heartbreaking circumstances to create such an emotionally charged poem
words of wisdom
Well written, congrats
Hi Kelli, your poem evokes a deep sense of loss, self-doubt, and the weight of mistakes. It explores how, in times of struggle, attempts at control and seeking forgiveness often feel futile, as the damage has already been done. The imagery of rust, corrosion, and cracks suggests a disintegration of trust and self-assurance. The perseverance mentioned is a poignant reminder of how we continue to move forward, despite our failures, hiding our vulnerabilities along the way. It resonates with the idea that the battle within ourselves never truly ends. Masterpiece !!!!