It feels like drowning when you are on your own
Surrounded by people but still alone.
It makes you feel like a plastic sheet
Ocean throws you at its feet.
When you are no more welcomed by the ocean
So, you linger on the shore in morose motion.
Then you meet another one who
Lives on the shore just like you.
He seems content, has happy days,
It looks at you and then he says,
Agonizing it is when you do not belong.
But do not fret sunshine, the journey is long.
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Comments (6)
lovely
the journey is long, soo truee
i can relate with these lines soo much
nice
well done
beautiful words