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The Hunt

What We Chase and What We Carry Back

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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I follow a shadow through the hill side

It leaps when I move forward

waits when I lose my nerve

My body stumbles after it

my hands ache with wanting to hold

Every step feels like a wager

every glance a plea

The world wraps itself around one shape

half seen half believed

a promise stretched across the distance

At times I think it's coming for me

measuring my resolve

As though the capture would undo the chase

as though I were the one being hunted

What hunger pulls me this far

Is it triumph I long for

or the sweetness of loss

the strange fullness of an empty palm

The field finally closes

The shape dissolves into stillness

I walk home with no prize to show

yet everything changed

The chase beats on inside me

Desire holds heavier on me

than any trophy could ever weigh

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • C. Rommial Butler4 months ago

    Experience remains regardless the result. Well-wrought!

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    The chase is the thing! Well done

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