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The House That Remembers Me

My childhood home

By Marie381Uk Published 9 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The House That Remembers Me

I went back to the house today

It didn’t look at me

But it knew

The gate stuck where it always did

The path still cracked at the corner

The front step sagged, like before

I didn’t knock

I didn’t have to

The door opened slow

Same as when I was thirteen

And late

Inside, the walls kept quiet

But the floor remembered every footstep

Mine

Theirs

Even the ones that ran

A cupboard creaked on its own

Not to scare—just tired of being closed

The tap dripped once

Like it did that night

Like it never stopped

The mirror in the hall

Still tilted to one side

I didn’t look in it

I stood in my old room

The light came in wrong

Like it forgot how

I left nothing there

But the house kept it all

I heard the floor behind me shift

Soft, like someone careful

Not to startle the dust

I didn’t turn

Didn’t need to

They stood just far enough

For silence to stretch

But not break

They looked around

Like I had

But slower

Like they weren’t sure if they were allowed

Their hand brushed the wall

Like it might breathe

Like it might speak back

I said nothing

And so did they

But the house

The house knew both our names

We left together, not side by side

But with the same weight in our steps

The door closed behind us

Not loud, not soft

Just certain

Out in the air,

The world looked too new

Too clean

But behind us,

The house breathed once

And then

Let go

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Tales That Breathe at Night9 months ago

    This made ne nostalgic about my childhood home. Great piece @Marie381Uk

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    It seems this house is full of memories of the young and old when they meet themselves coming and going and sharing in a way. Good job.

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Very nice, it seems to be my grandpa's house. Well written.

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Very nice

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