
The House That Remembers Me
I went back to the house today
It didn’t look at me
But it knew
The gate stuck where it always did
The path still cracked at the corner
The front step sagged, like before
I didn’t knock
I didn’t have to
The door opened slow
Same as when I was thirteen
And late
Inside, the walls kept quiet
But the floor remembered every footstep
Mine
Theirs
Even the ones that ran
A cupboard creaked on its own
Not to scare—just tired of being closed
The tap dripped once
Like it did that night
Like it never stopped
The mirror in the hall
Still tilted to one side
I didn’t look in it
I stood in my old room
The light came in wrong
Like it forgot how
I left nothing there
But the house kept it all
I heard the floor behind me shift
Soft, like someone careful
Not to startle the dust
I didn’t turn
Didn’t need to
They stood just far enough
For silence to stretch
But not break
They looked around
Like I had
But slower
Like they weren’t sure if they were allowed
Their hand brushed the wall
Like it might breathe
Like it might speak back
I said nothing
And so did they
But the house
The house knew both our names
We left together, not side by side
But with the same weight in our steps
The door closed behind us
Not loud, not soft
Just certain
Out in the air,
The world looked too new
Too clean
But behind us,
The house breathed once
And then
Let go

About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️




Comments (4)
This made ne nostalgic about my childhood home. Great piece @Marie381Uk
It seems this house is full of memories of the young and old when they meet themselves coming and going and sharing in a way. Good job.
Very nice, it seems to be my grandpa's house. Well written.
Very nice