The House at the End
You know the one.

There’s a house –
at the end of the road –
you know the one.
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Windows like cataracts –
and a door that hasn’t opened in years,
but sometimes –
ajar.
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No one moves in.
No one moves out.
But the porch light flickers
like a dying pulse.
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Once, a man walked up those steps.
Knocked twice.
The house swallowed the sound.
He never knocked again.
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A murmur lingers –
under the floorboards.
Soft.
Repeating.
The neighbor swears it’s just rats.
But rats don’t whisper.
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At night, the shadows stretch
longer than they should.
The wind dies
before it reaches the gate.
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The postman skips this address.
The children cross the street.
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This is Old Town.
Every year, more people vanish.
Old ones,
who linger too long.
Young ones,
who never do.
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And the house –
which was human,
once, and no longer –
listens to other voices.
From beyond the house, where the city ends.
Old wilderness.
from before names,
and roads.
A place of mists,
and things that shift
when you’re not looking.
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The house will not stay empty.
It will have a family.
Then more.
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One by one.
No one moves in.
No one moves out.
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Then one day –
Not anyone.
.
About the Creator
Iris Obscura
Do I come across as crass?
Do you find me base?
Am I an intellectual?
Or an effed-up idiot savant spewing nonsense, like... *beep*
Is this even funny?
I suppose not. But, then again, why not?
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I read this the other day and meant to come back and comment on it. So here I am back to comment on it. I read it and subscribed instantly. I loved the line "windows like cataracts," as Em highlighted. And there is this beautiful economy of words - you say so much without unnecessarily bloating it. I was easily carried away with the narrative. Bloody great writing.
Superbly written!!!💕❤️❤️
That line, “windows like cataracts.” Just brilliant. Incredible storytelling and that abrupt ending? The cherry on top. Beautiful.