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The Hollow

A Dance with Shadows and Secrets

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Beneath the veil of moonlit glow,

The air grows thick with tales of woe.

A haunting voice from shadows deep

Awakens things that never sleep.

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The gnarled trees, they creak and sway,

Their roots entwined with bones of clay.

The earth beneath you shifts and sighs,

It feels your heart, it hears your cries.

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A whisper slithers through the night,

A breath so cold it steals the light.

It knows your name; it calls you near,

Its every word a taste of fear.

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The chill descends, the fog rolls tight,

A clawed hand flickers just from sight.

It draws you close, your will unwinds,

For once you enter, there’s no way to find.

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The lanterns dim, the silence swells,

From lips unseen, a story tells:

Of souls that wandered far and wide,

And joined the roots, where secrets hide.

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The darkened ground begins to hum,

A melody that leaves you numb.

The whispers swell, they twist and bind,

With every word, they claim your mind.

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You run, you stumble, breathless, lost,

The night around you, cold and crossed.

But with each step, you start to know,

The Hollow’s grip will never let go.

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So heed these words, and tread with care,

For in the dark, they linger there.

The ones who whisper, sigh, and moan—

The Hollow’s children call you home.

Pantoum

About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oooo, I loved how dark this was! Well done

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Dancing in the shadows you have to be careful don't you. Good work.

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