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The Hollow Man’s Hymn

A Lullaby for the Lost and the Damned

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 11 months ago 1 min read

Hush now, child, don’t make a sound,

The Hollow Man walks on haunted ground.

He comes where shadows twist and creep,

To steal the breath of those who sleep.

His voice is wind, a cold, dead sigh,

A whisper spun from those who cry.

He sings a song of dust and bone,

A dirge for souls that die alone.

His fingers thin, like brittle twigs,

They pluck the air in silent jigs.

A touch so light, so soft, so thin,

He’ll slip beneath your fragile skin.

No use to run, no use to hide,

He waits beyond the mortal tide.

The door you lock, the light you keep,

Won’t save you when you start to weep.

For when you wake in dead of night,

And find the air is far too tight,

You’ll know he’s there—his lips so near,

Humming death into your ear.

So hush now, child, close your eyes,

Before he claims his lullaby.

Ode

About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    Chilling and now I am not sure I want to go to sleep tonight. Good job.

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Woooooo me sleeping with light on tonight lol luv it ✍️🍎

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