Imagine hearing your lover's voice
as you walk through a dark corridor
to a closed door,
light pouring from the frame.
You squint as you open the door,
the light is so bright
it hurts your eyes.
Then you see it!
Everything is green!
Green light!
Green leaves!
Green water!
Green!
And in the center of the room is your terrified lover,
laying on a raft
surrounded by dark stones;
no, not stones.
Hippos!
They play in the water,
and they cool their skin in the water.
The close ones yawn.
With dread, you realize,
the only way to reach your lover
is to jump on these hippos
like stepping stones.
So you jump.
Not bad.
They're not as scary as you thought.
You jump
and you jump
and it's easier
than you thought!
You're halfway there when suddenly,
you slip!
You splash in the green waters,
swimming to the surface.
The hippos don't notice.
Maybe you can swim the rest of the way!
So you swim,
and you swim,
and you swim
and you swim!
You rest and look ahead.
You're almost there!
Then something slides across your leg,
and you flail,
making the hippos notice
for the first time.
You scream as they come
and forget to hold your breath
as they pull you under.
You try to scream as you go down,
but you can't breathe.
You know it's time to die.
Then you hear a soft voice say,
"Hey, wake up! Wake up!"
You open your eyes and
are back in your room,
your lover with his arms
around you.
Later that day, you look up
hippos in green.
Groups of hipppos mean
relax.
Green means
positive change and hope
and many other things.
Was it a nightmare,
or a prophecy of
good things to come?
About the Creator
Alfie Jane
A wandering soul who writes about anything and everything. Former expat, future cook and writer. Will take any challenge that comes her way.
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Comments (6)
Loved this! Hippos make me happy and I do think this dream is a sign of good things to come :) This was a fun read!
This was so good
Enjoyed! Hopefully it means good things to come!
Great work, cute yet the hippopotamus is one of the most dangerous animals in the world. β€οΈ
Fabulous!!! Loved itπππ
Very good!